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Re: Fear
I hope you do not mind if I beg to defer. It was mainly the first stanza which generated interest. The speaker goes on and on about the topic which ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: A Simple Mistake (Prologue) [edited]
So...a take on how we try to imagine the worse when it does not even happen.Thats nice. Frankly,it is true that we find a simple mistake might make people angry ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Swat Kats,Captain Plannet,He Man,.........
Write anything you would like to if you grew up with these and other pre 2000 cartoon shows like Jonny Quest,Dexter's Laboratory etc. Some of these links will revive your ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Deleted
Despite this being "true" poem about people who do not fit in,you may have oversimplified the presentation. to avoid the conformist stream, always staying unique. Even though her convictions lead ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: We All Go Marching One by One
I think we all know what the theme is about. About the poem now: The women are marching seven by seven Wondering if they're walking to heaven This does not ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: I am Superhuman
Towards the end I felt confused and strangely inspired. Though you want to keep that theme of "mystery" to some lines you should not overuse it.The poem must flow in ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Farzan
When it comes to a piece like this I really don't know whereto start. The general feel of this was two buddies hanging out together,figuring what they might grow up ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Dr. Plant's Diagnostics (mostly verse and short stories)
First and foremost,really helpful insight.The story was not based on personal experience but did lack creativity I guess. Tell me if you found this creative: If you would not like ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: Dr. Plant's Diagnostics (mostly verse and short stories)
Would this qualify for a review?-
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: MissMiaFacinelli's Review Book
Thank you.
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Summer Time Is...
I think this was asked before.
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Are ghosts real?
Not seen one yet.
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Library or Book Store?
Books store wins hands down.
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: What Do You Like About YWS?
Debate,debate and debate.Very important and the only place where people think with their brains.
Oct 22, 2009 -
Re: Blogs Blogs Blogs
Never used one.
Oct 22, 2009
